Writing Poems
Writing poems is not easy,
Writing poems makes me dizzy.
I could write you an essay
But can’t write poems today.
Writing poems, finding rhyme
It’s so boring, takes my time
Makes me think and makes me sleepy,
Makes me sick and makes me weepy.
Writing poems is not fun.
I just want to run and run,
Run away and hide somewhere,
Where writing is unfair.
I could run to any place
Where poetry’s erased,
I will do there everything
But I won’t write a thing.
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ReplyDeleteyou give me very clear thoughts about how you think of writing is. Very interesting! love it.
ReplyDeleteI think your poem is interesting. For example, "Makes me think and makes me sleepy, makes me sick and makes me weepy" and "Writing poem is not fun,I just want to run and run". Even if you don't like writing poem, during you are tinking, you already wrote an interesting poem.
ReplyDeleteI could give clear thought about you don't really like write the poem. You like an essay more than the poem, so interesting. like,"Makes me think and makes me sleepy,Makes me sick and makes me weepy. Run away and hide somewhere,Where writing is unfair."
ReplyDeleteReading this poem makes me laugh so hard.
ReplyDeleteUndoubtedly, I agree with all my heart.
You got upset, couldn't write it so fast.
Sat and cried, wondered what would be the last.
Now your poem has been written.
Honestly, i'd like to give it ten.
the rhymes and meaning are fabulous.
So please, keep it up and make one again.
Thank you guys for your comments - appreciate it...
ReplyDeleteI like your poem! it is so honest, just reading it I can see that you had fun writing it, and the rhyme is amazing!
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