Without You
You’re the bright sun that shines in my sky
Without you all is dark and I could die
I know it sounds like a beautiful lie
But I know those words make you shy.
You are the light of my eyes, always so kind
Without you, believe me I am so blind
Can’t see, can’t look, therefore nothing I can find
I will just walk away losing my mind.
I don’t know how your love can be
Just like a dose of ecstasy
But what I know and I will see,
Is you fulfilling my fantasy.
IMPRESSIVE!
ReplyDeleteI like the word "beautiful lie".
Also, the rhymes in this poem make the poem sounds more interested
I really like your poem because it's so warm and romantic,especially "You are the light of my eyes, always so kind.Without you, believe me I am so blind."
ReplyDeleteChristopher! It's AMAZING!!! who was your muse? The meaning of your poem is very beautiful and romantic...Rhyme, rhythm and rhyme scheme are wonderful...One of the best poems I've ever read in my life!
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