Thursday, October 20, 2011

lanlan chen

Love


Love is a kind of emotion
Soft likes lotion
Love is friendship between friends
It always never ends

The pleasure of romance
With sweet, silly dance
Love is a lotus flower
Pure likes a glass of water

Love is hearing your favorite voice
It controls you, you don’t have a choice.
Love always in our heart
It can’t be apart

4 comments:

  1. I really like the way you used the rime because at the same time you are expressing what the love means for you.

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  3. The rhyme you used is very beautiful...I love your poem, especially the line "It always never ends" I love the most =)

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  4. I think "silly dance" is a proper term to describe people who are falling in love. I like it.

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