Heart broken
He went to the memorized place,
With the familiar face.
He rides his old bike,
With the person he likes.
They watched the last show,
With the camera he borrows.
There should be the ending,
The way they act is called pretending.
The photo he holds belongs to the person he misses.
He is longing for the last kiss.
He still loves her forever,
But the girl can’t be with him ever.
I like this poem, because you tried to spit out what your feeling and what you want to share with us. it seemd you had a bad memory, which made you upset."He still loves her forever,
ReplyDeleteBut the girl can’t be with him ever." this is very sad....:(
Wa....i like this poem, that boy love that girl very much. But everything was past....
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because you put your heart in it.I think you write it with your deep emotion.What's more,you write your every sentence using "with..." as the end.
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