Thursday, October 20, 2011

yazid almuhen

One day I was passing by the beach



One day I was passing by the beach
I stopped and saw the waves and the sun
But I had an important place to reach
I couldn’t help it, I went in and had fun

I swam until the time was very late
I was happy until I got there
My father was yelling, that’s what I hate
I told him there was traffic everywhere

It’s always like this, there’s good, there’s bad
I swam and had fun but then I was sad
Very good things happen in very bad times
Very good things happen in very bad times

2 comments:

  1. One thing I liked about your poem is that you made it as a story and it sounds fun and, also the way you used the rime is very good.

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  2. Nice poem...thats true even in bad times something good can happen and make you laugh.

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