Memories
Our minds still remember.
The dark night of November
when the clouds were crying
And our minds were flying.
We were sitting in the floor,
I hear a sound behind the door;
There were cats in the house.
They were catching a mouse.
It was a scary night.
And then you were there like a light;
My heart was as crying stone;
Because we were very alone.
I really like the feeling that your poem give to me, from your poem I can feel you are alone when you memorize the time which you wrote. Also you are good to describe the dark night which you were scary and alone.
ReplyDeleteAlma something i liked about your poem is that easily i can see your feelings,I liked how you used rhyme scheme. I really liked the way you also used personification, it is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAlma i like your poem specially the first stanza. You did a great job
ReplyDeletei very like the first stanza of your poem, it makes me want to know what happen next and the rhyme scheme used very well.Also i really like that you put the picture on the poem.
ReplyDeleteQUe tienrnoo! i like your poem because it has a very good rhyme scheme! Good Job :)
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