I smile…
I smile; I have lived almost 21 years in the world.
I smile; I can stay with her for about 3 years.
I smile when I see her face.
I smile when I am behind her pace.
I smile like candy.
I smile like a rainbow.
I smile, the flower is smiling.
I smile, I have a wonderful life.
I smile when you get success
I smile when my father screams to me, because he worries about me.
I smile when the baby grows up as strong as a tree.
I smile the sun shine brings me hopeful.
I smile when the day is gone.
I smile when I have fun.
I smile when I want to cry.
I smile when there is nothing wrong.
I smile because everything is all right.
I smile because I smile so well.
I smile because you smile.
I smile with no reason.
I think your poem is very interesting. I like your rhyme and I think you are so optimistic.
ReplyDeleteI like this sentence "I smile like candy." . Haha, I feel you have a good emotion. Good job Xu yan.
ReplyDeleteFrom your poem, I know that you really like smiling. Just keep it. I like your sentence "I smile when I want to cry".
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem...It made me smile too =) I love the line which says "I smile when I want to cry"...I think people should do it more often...
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